hi guys,
I will have an English speech in my Eng class this coming Wed. , but I don’t know how to write these two sentences correctly and properly, would you please help me, I will appreciate that : )
There was a young man who walked in front of me, and he backpacked.
His backpack has a open side pocket that is sitting in the water bottle.
[quote=“Sebas Lancer”]hi guys,
I will have an English speech in my Eng class this coming Wed. , but I don’t know how to write these two sentences correctly and properly, would you please help me, I will appreciate that : )
There was a young man who walked in front of me, and he backpacked.
His backpack has a open side pocket that is sitting in the water bottle.[/quote]
[quote=“Sebas Lancer”]
There was a young man walking in front of me with a backpack which had an open side pocket with a water bottle inside.
The young man walking in front of me had a water bottle in the open side pocket of his backpack.
The young backpacker sitting in the open water bottle had pockets and was walking
[quote=“BlownWideOpen”]The young backpacker sitting in the open water bottle had pockets and was walking[/quote] 
Don’t forget the smiley.
Seriously, here’s a possibility:
There was a young man walking in front of me, and he was wearing a backpack.
His backpack had an open side pocket with a water bottle in it.
(If these two sentences are part of the same narrative, be mindful of consistent use of tense.)
wow ~thanks for your help!!
but it confused me, which one i should use??
Mine is the most accurate. You should use mine
Whichever you prefer (except for the joke answer provided by BlownWideOpen).
You should also listen to Chris
I believe that the exercise was to combine two sentences in a grammatically appropriate manner while using a natural flowing syntax. Hence, you should use the following and not listen to the jokesters:
The young man walking in front of me had a water bottle in the open side pocket of his backpack.
thanks !! you guys really save me