Looking for person/persons interested in swapping own written material (stories, articles, essays) for ruthless criticism. Local magazines are fine and okay but want and will give a hard honest opinion–difficult to get from friends. My attempts at writing don’t read serious, but hope for serious critique. Please post response or email me directly at defenestratorbaby@yahoo.com
Free first suggestion—work on your clarity. What does the first half of this sentence have to do with the second half:
Local magazines are fine and okay but want and will give a hard honest opinion–difficult to get from friends.
Did you go to the Zipppy school of non sequitor writing? Maybe okay for Zippy but not so great for writing off the comic page. No charge for the advice. Dr. Brian is always ready to help the word challenged. Further advice is available for a mere $1,500NT per hour or part thereof non pro rated —oh shit, now I am not making sense.
better get to work.
take care,
Brian the Writing Master
Thanks Brian and others for advice and offers. Clarity is a problem I’ll work on. Don’t have much money (certainly anything above 1400NT/hr is a bit much) so should have clarily included the word “swap” in my post.
Cheers
Zipy