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[color=darkblue]Hi

I need some real help in building up a new web site. I can make simple stuff like geocities etc etc. Yet now I want a more professional looking site. If you can make a very decent site and can help me set up the new site (teach me the new tools etc) it would be great. The best way I could pay you would be buy giving you some free diving/classes (that would be the best value added). Please look at my simple site, and from that you should know weather you can help me build a better site. :bravo:

With regards Scott
www.coastalpursuits.com[/color]

You have not given your web page a title. The code as it stands is:

[code]

index [/code]

That is annoying for anyone wanting to bookmark your web site. I suggest you give the page a title like this:

[code]

Coastal Pursuits - Affordable diving in Taiwan [/code]

Not to accuse you of not having planned the site before producing it, but when I look at it I feel like you didn’t do a lot of planning.

I would suggest looking at techsoup’s how-to stuff on web building, as a first step.

One big tip - the pictures on your main pages are too big, both in dimensions and in filesize. Make thumbnails - smaller versions - for the page proper, instead of linking to the big ones and using HTML to make them display at the smaller size. If you really need the full size pics, use thumbnails as links to the full size ones. As it stands, they’re slow to load and unecessarily slow down the site’s loading time. If you’ve got any people on modems looking at your site, they’ll give up before getting anywhere.

Personal taste point - drop the animated gifs entirely. They don’t exactly give a professional air to the site.

The design overall is unbalanced. Too many graphics on the left side of the page. Balance things out, maybe some pics on the left, some on the right, text in the middle, something like that. In fact, in terms of information content, your site’s back to front. The average English speaker’s eyes flick over content from top-left to bottom-right, so the most important information should be at the top left. In fact, on that point, the column-based layout of all the information seems counterintuitive. See if you can rearrange things to conform more to the habits of viewers.

The link to the course info is unclear. It’s a PADI logo, but that seems more likely to link to the PADI site or something - label it “courses” or something. Make everything clear. If people can’t find what they’re looking for at a glance, they’re not likely to make the effort. Plus you’ve tripled up on linking to the courses - waste of space, bandwidth, and effort. Link it once and make it clear.

An animated dolphin as a link to “Photography”? Where’s the connection?

As an overall suggestion, I’d say slim down on the images, put the links to external sites - like the livingreef.org one - at the very bottom of the page, and put more content on the front page. Give a brief rundown on who you are, what services you provide, where you are, that sort of thing. Don’t make the viewer have to dig to find basic information. Provide links to other pages in the site - like you already do for the courses and photography - for people who want more information, but by providing a bit of information on the front page you minimize the amount of work people need to do to find out how much they want your services. People are lazy.

I’d consider getting webspace from a professional webhosting service. Not to be blunt, but nothing says unprofessional quite like a website hosted by geocities.

Get a package that includes php or cgi and replace your email address with a “contact us” form. If not, you’ll get a ton of spam.

I’d also lose the animated gifs.

Replace the Times Roman with Arial or Verdana.

The images on the left should be smaller.

Plus everything that Tetsuo says.

:slight_smile:

I’ll be happy to help, but since I’m in Texas now payment terms would have to be credit card or Paypal.

My company:
ratherbeselling.com
Let me know if I can be of help!

Sam Vimes

I’d recommend reading about good design. There are lots of sites out there.

If you want examples of really nice sites, there are many places to look. One place is Communication Arts, Site of the Week. There are archives going back a while.

designinteract.com/sow/

if you want to simplify your task, you could get a wysiwyg design program. Even if you someday get really really really good, you may still want to use something like Adobe Golive to keep track of assets and manage all the files on your growing site.

NetObjects Fusion, if it’s still around, is pretty simple to make sites with.

beyond what tesuo said. You have an issue with the slide show(similan.html, paulau.html). It links to shutterfly and they require a login. Plus the 4 pictures/links in your pictures.html page links to the same page(photogrpahy.html). Sign up with some webhosting and host the images yourself. use the thumbnails to reduce the bandwidth usage. As a general rule, never size down an image using html code, always create a thumbnail instead. Look at how other sites are designed to give yourself ideas how to design your own pages. Think about what you are trying to achieve with your site. Do you want to create a community? Do you want to share photos? There are plenty of open source software out there that can do all those things.

Another suggestion is to see what other sites are out there that you feel are professional. Professional can mean many things. Make yourself a top 5 list of what you like about certain sites. Use that list as a basic guideline for your website development.

It looks to me like a business page and I would suggest you standardize on the following:

  1. Logo
  2. Colors of your company (so you can match the website pages to those colors) Do not use more than three colors for a “professional” website.
  3. Type of website - informational, promotional, blog-type. This will help you layout and plan your web pages. The purpose of your website will help you choose what features to use to make your site useful and attractive.

Good luck.


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Another thing to do is look at print design. Just study any magazine you think looks good.

Many really good designers have learned a lot from print.

[color=darkblue]Wow :notworthy: . Thanks all all the advice. I feel much of it is in the eye. Yet as understood, using geocities, the tools on offer are limited. I have moved the front page about and changed some links and font. As for the slide shows. I feel that the slide shows look decent (even if you do have to sign up). It seems the costs of getting a decent cool flash web design are just too costly. Thanks all. I can only hope, seeing the site is so poor :loco: , that word of mouth will enable the business to work.

With regards Scott
www.coastalpursuits.com

:rainbow: its all about the product…[/color]

Looking at the revised version, I’ve got to say that’s much better. The “Courses” page is still seriously lacking content though. Exactly what does a course involve? Where are they held? How much is it? How long is each course? What benefits does each course give? What level are each of them aimed at? What’s the difference between “Discover Scuba” and “Discover Scuba Diving”? You need information! If the viewers don’t leave decently more informed than they arrived, there’s no point having a website.

You should include “Courses” among the left-hand-side menu items. People shouldn’t have to accidentally mouse over the picture of the turtle to realize that’s the link for the courses information.

I have revamped, with my limited skill, the course (information) page, the links on each course are very detailed. What do you all think.

Scott
www.coastalpursuits.com

looking better.

You might consider some unified interface to navigate around the site. The few pages I checked out have only a home button back to the main page.

There are some many good books out there about design. You might just start out looking at pictures or even just noticing the design of everyday life; it’s all around us.